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The Deceptioin of a Lie by ~CrystalizedTears:iconCrystalizedTears:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open




Influence, Use, just the things we do
Manuver and Operate daggers from our mouth
Compensate and Control the untold secrets will befold
Work to Empty dreams and realities
Occupy, Spend, selfishness remains in the end
Recompense and Take up gratitude and time
Question and Slaughter true hearts for a lie
Transmit to Embezzle breathes with a kiss
Utilize, Dispatch, unattended responsbilities
Deplore and Release impositions that wreck
Search and Gaze for another unknown friend
Guzzle to Redo the same fate of mistake

The end, resides, can you remain faithful?
©2005-2009 ~CrystalizedTears
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Author's Comments

work in progress...the orginal, which i just did like 2 seconds ago got deleted bc my computer decided to just rebot for no reason and I lost it. There is no other copy and it was done and just true poetry with feelings written as going about, but now i have to try it again. it wont be the same

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~SapphireFox726 Jul 11, 2005, 7:51:40 AM
Very nice piece. Really forces the reader to really sit back and think about their lies and the lies of others. Well done!

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*~Ya parece que me muero por estar sin ti...~*
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~CrystalizedTears Jul 11, 2005, 3:40:32 PM
thank you. Glad you got it.

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"You can't help who you fall in love with; you're not supposed to."- Save the Last Dance
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~tonypucci Oct 13, 2005, 4:48:13 PM
Very nice....almost a sonnet! It's hard for us to be honest with ourselves, huh? Ultimately, we are all selfish and manipulative, trying to fill up what we sense are the deficiencies in our lives. At least, my cynical side says....

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Poetry, song lyrics & mp3s of original music at my website:
TONY PUCCI
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~CrystalizedTears Oct 24, 2005, 2:56:52 PM
exactly what my point was. Thank yo very much for you comment and input. Much appreciated. or as the cynical was goes...you understand the human nature of disorder, savagery, and darkness...

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"You can't help who you fall in love with; you're not supposed to."- Save the Last Dance
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